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The chart shows the Internet users as percentage of population.

The chart shows the Internet users as percentage of population. K0Y0w

The line chart gives the statistical information about the porpotion of the population of Internet users in three countries: The USA, Canada and Mexico from a six year period. As a general information, there are upward trends for both three countries. However, the percentage of Mexico experienced the lowest growth in the period shown. In 1999, just about 30 percent of the society in the America who use the Internet. The figures for Canada and Mexico were 20 percent and 15 percent respectively. In 2009, the percentage of Internet users in Canada experienced a critical rise from 60 percent to nearly 100 percent in the end of 2009. The figure for the United States was lower, almost 50 percent in 2003 and reached a peak of 80 percent in 2009. The porpotion of the Internet usages in Mexico rise over the period shown, but not sharply. It reached almost 30 percent at the end of 2009.

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