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The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of resident in uk in 2004.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of resident in uk in 2004. jwON

The given bar graph compares the amount of money spent by five age groups of the British citizens on three different items in the year 2004. Overall, it is observed that as age advanced, the spending priorities of people changed. The largest proportion of spending went on food and drinks in most age groups, except for the under 30, s and those between 61 and 75 years of age. The 61-75 age group, spent more on entertainment and less on restaurants and hotels than any other age group. It is noticeable that the expenditure on restaurants and hotels was almost similar among all age groups below 60. They spent 12-14% on this sector. The 61-75 and the 76+ age groups spent 2% and 7% on restaurants and hotels respectively. The under 45's spent 7-8% on entertainment, but all the other age groups spent considerably more on this sector. The 61-75 year olds, showed the highest spending (23%)on entertainment. The 76+ age group spent the maximum (23%), whereas the under 30 s spent the least (6%), on food and drink. it is interesting to see that the expenditure on food and drink grew as age advanced.

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