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The chart shows the food consumption in the world in 2014. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.( 150 WORDS)

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The pie chart depicts the food consumption all around the world in 2014. In general, in comparison with other seven types of food, meat was the most consumed whereas rice consumption was undoubtedly the smallest proportion. Getting back to the details, the quantity of meat consumed was the highest of all, which accounted for nearly one-third, followed by fish consumption, at a rate of 27, 9%. On the contrary, rice consumption was the lowest data on the pie chart, just 2. 5%. the bread was higher than that slightly at 5. 5%. Other 3 kind of food such as cereals vegetables and fruits’ share of consumption was almost exactly the same, around 10%.
The pie chart depicts the food
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all around the world in 2014.

In general
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in comparison
with other seven types of food, meat was the most consumed whereas rice
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was
undoubtedly
the smallest proportion.

Getting back to the
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, the quantity of meat consumed was the highest of all, which accounted for
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one-third, followed by fish
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, at a rate of 27, 9%.

On the contrary
, rice
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was the lowest data on the pie chart,
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2. 5%.
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bread was higher than that
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at 5. 5%. Other 3 kind of food such as cereals vegetables and fruits’ share of
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was almost exactly the same, around 10%.
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