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The chart shows the difference between in the characteristics of the USA and Canada.

The chart shows the difference between in the characteristics of the USA and Canada. wd7Y

The tabular data deplicts the comparison between the two countries USA and Canada. Though the difference is about sex, ages, incomes and occupations among the nations. To start with, the gender America have 57. 2% males and other females where as the Canada have 61. 1 % men and 38. 9 percent women. Just as above differentiation Canada have maximum age group than the US. Similarly there are the variation in income of these countries such as American people who have salary between 10000 to 30000 and likely to be less compared to the Canada. Comparatively individuals who have income about 30, 000 and above are more employed in America then the Canada. While comparing the occupation students are in the greater number in US then Canada. Where as the percentage of house wife as well as employee is more in USA than the Canada. Overall chart is about the comparison of the characteristics among the two different nations.

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