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The table chart gives information about how many travelers were used the three main airports of British from 1998 till 2003.

The table chart gives information about how many travelers were used the three main airports of British from 1998 till 2003. E31WL
The table chart gives information about how many travelers were used the three main airports of British from 1998 till 2003. Overall, according to the diagram, a number of travelers used of British three airports were increased. Furthermore, Gatwick’s and Stansted’s quantity of travelers used from those airports were normally gone up, also the others utilized from the Heathrow airport was increased but with some decreasing periods. Firstly, travelers of Gatwick’s airport used with the hugest amount, and their numbers were boomed from 36. 5 to 69. 3 millions of travelers between 1998 and 2003. Secondly, Quantity of travelers in Heathrow used were gone up to 48. 2 million travelers in 2000, after two years, numbers of travelers were decreased, but finally annual travelers who used from the Heathrow’s airport, reached 45. 6 million. Finally, quantity of Stansted’s travelers’ used from the airport was minimally boomed from 17. 3 to 43. 3 million travelers till 2001, besides, remained stable in 2001, 2002 and 2003 years
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IELTS academic The table chart gives information about how many travelers were used the three main airports of British from 1998 till 2003.

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