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The chart shows sectors contributing in GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000

The chart shows sectors contributing in GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000 KGW9N
The bar graph depict the information about the role of IT and service industry of UK in Gross domestic product. By having a quick glance at provided illustration it is clear that IT industry was playing a major role in GDP in UK from the year 1992 to 2000 as compared to service industry. Moving to rest of the information it is evident that there was a steady increase in the service industry from the year 1992 to 2000 towards GDP but the IT industry was a dominant factor over service industry Moving further, IT industry contributed towards GDP with a remarkable percentage of 14. 5% approx whereas service industry only contributed with 8% there was a huge difference in both. In year 1992 the percentage of IT and service industry were 6% and 4% respectively which is least percentage in both cases whereas in year 2000 both having maximum percentage that is 8% and 14% in service and IT industry respectively. All in all it is clear that IT industry have a significant role in increasing GDP of UK
The bar graph depict the information about the role of IT and
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of UK in Gross domestic product. By having a quick glance at provided illustration it is
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clear
that IT
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industry
was playing a major role in GDP in UK from the
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year
1992 to 2000 as compared to
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service
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industry
. Moving to rest of the information it is evident that there was a steady increase in the
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service
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industry
from the
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1992 to 2000 towards GDP
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the IT
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was a dominant factor over
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, IT
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contributed towards GDP with a remarkable
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of 14. 5% approx whereas
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industry
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contributed with 8% there was a huge difference in both. In
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1992 the
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of IT and
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were 6% and 4%
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in both cases whereas in
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2000 both having maximum
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and IT
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respectively
. All in all it is
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that IT
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have a significant role in increasing GDP of
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