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the chart shows one's country export values

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The chart shown above shoves us the value of some country’s export in many categories during the years 2015 and 2016. On the chart we can see that petroleum products increased in year 2016 such for three procent which is not as big diffrence as engineered good which has increased for over eight procent. Othervise gems and jewellery had a higher procentage in the earlier year, in 2016 it has fallen for ove five procent. Argicultural produscts are stable, they incresed only zero point eighty-five procent this shows that the same amount of people can afford going on vacation and use the potential of spending some quality time far from home. The biggest raise was noted in textilium products which have increased for almost sixteen procent, that means that people are buying mmore clothes which are the cause of polluting the enviroment. The chart shows that people in year 2016 have invested more of their money in short investments such as clothes or vacation. Zajęło mi to równo 20 minut
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country’s export in
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categories during the years 2015 and 2016.

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that petroleum products increased in
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2016 such for three
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gems and
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had a higher
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