Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart shows information relating to UK music sales from 1990 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart shows information relating to UK music sales from 1990 to 2020. mKqK
The graph below shows us the variation of different music sales over two decades that is from 1990 to 2020 in UK. The vast variation took place in digital music. The sales increased in huge number in this category. In 1990, digital music had no sales. Year by year their sales increased. At the end of 2020, the sales are reached to 2000 pounds which was the highest. Coming to CDs they decreased in the mentioned period. In 1990, CDs are sold in huge number compared to other categories. Their sales at that time are 500 pounds. In contrast to digital and downloaded music, sales of this category decreased year by year. By the end of 2020, their sales ended at 200 pounds. The sales of Cassettes and Vinyl had not crossed 200 in these 20 years. In 1990 the sales of Cassettes were 100 pounds. Their sales decreased very much that at the end of 2020, their sales were 0. Coming to Vinyl, there was a slight fluctuation in these sales in the mentioned period. They gained less profit in this period. To conclude, the sales for digital music increased in huge amount whereas CDs sales had a huge loss. Cassettes and Vinyl sales were some what same over this period.
The graph below
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
us the variation of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
over two decades
that is
from 1990 to 2020 in UK.

The vast variation took place in digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
increased in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
huge
number in this category. In 1990, digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
had no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Year
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
increased. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of 2020, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
are reached
to
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
2000 pounds
which was the highest. Coming to CDs they decreased in the mentioned period. In 1990, CDs
are sold
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
huge
number compared to other categories. Their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
at that time are
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
500 pounds
.
In contrast
to digital and downloaded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of this category decreased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
. By the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of 2020, their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
ended at
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
200 pounds
.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of Cassettes and Vinyl had not crossed 200 in these 20 years. In 1990 the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of Cassettes were
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
100 pounds
. Their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
decreased
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much that at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of 2020, their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
were 0. Coming to Vinyl, there was a slight fluctuation in these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
in the mentioned period. They gained less profit in this period.

To conclude
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
for digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
increased in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
huge
amount whereas CDs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
had a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
huge
loss. Cassettes and Vinyl
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
were
Did you mean "somewhat" (=slightly)?
some what
same over this period.

IELTS academic The chart shows information relating to UK music sales from 1990 to 2020.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart shows information relating to UK music sales from 1990 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.