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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Wwja

This table shows income of teachers of secondary and high school in 2009. It is clear from the graph that we have various number and contries. According to what is shown, it looks that Luxembourg, a mini state between Germany and France, start with 80K, after 15 years your salary would rise by 39K to be 119K and after another 15 year would be 132K and this the maximum salary you can reach to it. Then, Japan and Korea pretty much the same. You will start with around 30K. Japan after 15 years would be 65 and Korea would be 48. After that uou will is 86K. While korea you will need 19 years to have 62K. And eventually this is the maximum income. While, in Australia you start with 28K and after 9 years you will have the maximum salary and that is 48K. Then, Denmark would start with 45K and after just 8 years you will have 54K and that the top income. To sum up, we could say that in western countries salaries intend to more. And you need less years to reach to the maximum income. Expect Luxembourg. But in eastern states if you reach to the maximum income would be higher than western Luxembourg. And there is also the number of years. In western states in less number of years you will have maximum salary but that is more eastern states and Luxembourg.

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 income of teachers of secondary and high school in 2009. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
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 from the graph that we have various number and Possible spelling mistake found.countriescontrailscontrivescontrailcon tries
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 with 80K, after 15 years your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
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 would be 132K and this the maximum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
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 with around 30K. Japan after 15 years would be 65 and Korea would be 48. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 you will need 19 years to have 62K. And eventually
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 with 28K and after 9 years you will have the maximum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
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 48K. Then, Denmark would You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutsetdawnkickoffopening
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 with 45K and after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 8 years you will have 54K and that the top income.

To sum up, we could say that in western countries You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
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 years to reach to the maximum income. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
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 Luxembourg. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 in eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcase
states
 if you reach to the maximum income would be higher than western Luxembourg. And there is also
 the number of years. In western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcase
states
 in less number of years you will have maximum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
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 and Luxembourg. 