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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. oG3D

The line graph compares the quantity of junk food which was eaten by teenagers of Australia between 1975 and 2000. Overall, everything increased with the exception of fish and chips which showed a constant decrease, and pizza and hamburgers have overtaken fish and chips in the middle of the period. In terms of, pizza and hamburgers, they are consumed less than twenty times per year. The figure for the consumption of hamburgers rose considerably to more than 80 times by 1985 whereas the figure for pizza showed a steady rise, and reached at the same number as hamburgers in 1995. Then, hamburgers climbed gradually to 100 times by 1995, and it leveled off at 100 in 1995 and 2000 while pizza stabilized at just above 80 times per year, in the time period 1995 to 2000. By contrast, fish and chips were peaked at 100 times in 1975, but they declined dramatically to just above 80 times before rose noticeably again in 1985. Then, it fell steeply until fell over near to 40 times per year at the end of the period.

The line graph compares the quantity of junk food which was eaten
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 of Australia between 1975 and 2000.

Overall
, everything increased Consider using "except" or "except for"exceptexcept for
with the exception of
 fish and chips which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a constant decrease, and pizza and hamburgers have overtaken fish and chips in the middle of the period.

In terms of, pizza and hamburgers, they are consumed
 less than twenty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 per year. The figure for the consumption of hamburgers rose considerably
 to more than 80 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 by 1985 whereas the figure for pizza This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a steady rise, and reached at the same number as hamburgers in 1995. Then, hamburgers climbed gradually
 to 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 by 1995, and it leveled off at 100 in 1995 and 2000 while pizza stabilized at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above 80 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 per year, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 period 1995 to 2000.

By contrast, fish and chips were peaked
 at 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 in 1975, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they declined dramatically
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above 80 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 rose noticeably
 again in 1985. Then, it fell steeply
 until fell over near to 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 per year at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. 