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The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and the threats to plant life.

The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and the threats to plant life. O1qM
The line graph represents the information regarding extinction of flora and fauna in tropical forests. The data is taken from tropical forests in the world during 10decade between 2000-2100. The pie chart reveals that detailing the sources pf threats to plant lifestyle. Overall, it can be clerly seen that we can see that disappearing rates are increasing and also human impact is responsible for far more harm to plant existence than natural events. According to graph, in 2020, the pattern of components go up slightly, accounting for 10, 000. The next 2050 year, this figure is predicted a sharp rocket more than two times that of 30-years before. The most striking thing is that it is expected to reach a peak in the future while the number of extinctions of plant and animal species will be going on a dramatic decrease between 2080-2100. A more detailed look at the impact of various types of activity on plant survival. The level of development witness a slight discrepency than the others in human enforcement. The index of agriculture is noticably different in human impact, it exceed by 9, compared to logging. In terms of other influences almost unchanged. Furhermore, there is a gradual rise in other natural events, constituted for 11, 7percent. Moreover, natural cases see a lower indicator in natural disaster, boasting about 7.
The line graph represents the information regarding extinction of flora and fauna in tropical forests. The data
is taken
from tropical forests in the world during 10decade between 2000-2100.
The
pie chart reveals that detailing the sources pf threats to
plant
lifestyle.
Overall
, it can be
clerly
seen
that we can
see
that disappearing rates are increasing and
also
human impact is responsible for far more harm to
plant
existence than
natural
events
. According to graph, in 2020, the pattern of components
go
up
slightly
, accounting for 10, 000. The
next
2050 year, this figure
is predicted
a sharp rocket more than two times that of 30-years
before
. The most striking thing is that it is
expected
to reach a peak in the future while the number of extinctions of
plant
and animal species will be going on a dramatic decrease between 2080-2100. A more detailed look at the impact of various types of activity on
plant
survival. The level of development witness a slight
discrepency
than the others in human enforcement. The index of agriculture is
noticably
different
in human impact, it
exceed
by 9, compared to logging. In terms of other influences almost unchanged.
Furhermore
, there is a gradual rise in other
natural
events
, constituted for 11, 7percent.
Moreover
,
natural
cases
see
a lower indicator in
natural
disaster, boasting about 7.
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