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the gender distribution of doing scientific research across a range of disciplines at a UK university

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The given bar chart illustrates the gender distribution of doing scientific research across a range of disciplines at a UK university Overall, the number of men studying the provided 6 science-related subjects almost outstripped that of women, excluding the last discipline. As can be seen, males made up an enormously large proportion in terms of natural sciences, such as Physics, Astronomy. Geology. The gender gap was noticeably considerable in the field of Physics, where male students were well over 5 times as many as female students. However, the 3 other subjects' disciplines follow a little different trend with a strikingly growing number of females. In biology and medicine, there were nearly as many women as men. Veterinary medicine was the sole subject that women obviously outnumber men.
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bar chart illustrates the gender distribution of doing scientific research across a range of disciplines at a UK university

Overall
, the number of
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men
studying the provided 6 science-related subjects almost outstripped that of women, excluding the last discipline.

As can be
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seen
, males made up an
enormously
large proportion in terms of natural sciences, such as Physics, Astronomy. Geology. The gender gap was
noticeably
considerable in the field of Physics, where male students were well over 5 times as
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many
as female students.

However
, the 3 other subjects' disciplines follow a
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little
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different
trend with a
strikingly
growing number of females. In biology and medicine, there were
nearly
as
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many
women as
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men
. Veterinary medicine was the sole subject that women
obviously
outnumber
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men
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