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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world P96g

The ratio of water consumed for various purposes in six zones of the globe is given on the charts. In general/In sum/Overall/Generally, all areas utilise water in Domestic use the least. Also, highly- developed regions often have a large amount of water for Industries. First of all, more than 70% of water usage for farming in four zones including Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia and South America with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71%, respectively. These areas have almost 2 to 2. 5 times the percentile of respective ones for North America and Europe with 39% and 32%. Moreover, it appears that the lowest area uses less than the highest one 56%. Secondly, it seems that North America and Europe have almost half of their water usage allocated to the Industries while other territories just have approximately 10% for that use. Furthermore, for Domestic purposes, Central Asia and Southeast Asia utilise 7% in total of their use while others have a relatively larger ratio, with South America being roughly three times more than the previous one.

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water
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given
 on the charts.

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/In sum/Overall
/Generally
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utilise
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water
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use
 the least. Also
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 for Industries.

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First of all
, more than 70% of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 usage for farming in four zones including Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia and South America with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71%, respectively
. These areas have almost 2 to 2. 5 times the percentile of respective ones for North America and Europe with 39% and 32%. Moreover
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 less than the highest one 56%.

Secondly
, it seems that North America and Europe have almost half of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 usage allocated to the Industries while other territories This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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. Furthermore
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utilise
 7% in total of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
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 while others have a relatively
 larger ratio, with South America being roughly three times more than the previous one. 