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the chart provides information about different ways of waste disposal in one European country from 2005 to 2008

the chart provides information about different ways of waste disposal in one European country from 2005 to 2008 55XkA
The given chart compares the procedure of disposal in various methods (landfill, burning and dumping at sea) in a certain European nation between 2005 and 2008. Units are measured by million tons. Overall, there was a downward trend of filling in land, the opposite was true for burning while dumping at sea remained stability during the showed years. Additionally, it seems to be more prevalent in burning while landfill and dumping at sea were balance. In 2005, 18000 million tons was the data of landfill, higher than nearly four times than that of using heat, at 500. Furthermore, thermal process of disposal accounted for the least portion out of all three methods at the same time. The next two years witnessed a turnaround in both figures, the latter surpassed the former in the end of this period and reach approximately 900 million tons while the landfill data stopped at 600. Regard to others, there was no change in the data of dumping in the sea during the three years. 600 million tons of disposal were processed under the sea in 2005, followed by a minute decrease in 2008.
The
given
chart compares the procedure of disposal in various methods
(landfill
, burning and
dumping
at
sea)
in a certain European nation between 2005 and 2008. Units
are measured
by
million
tons.

Overall
, there was a downward trend of filling in land, the opposite was true for burning while
dumping
at
sea
remained stability during the
showed
years.
Additionally
, it seems to be more prevalent in burning while
landfill
and
dumping
at
sea
were
balance.

In 2005, 18000
million
tons was the data of
landfill
, higher than
nearly
four times than that of using heat, at 500.
Furthermore
, thermal process of disposal accounted for the least portion out of all three methods at the same time. The
next
two years witnessed a turnaround in both figures, the latter surpassed the former in the
end
of this period and reach approximately 900
million
tons while the
landfill
data
stopped
at 600.

Regard to others, there was no
change
in the data of
dumping
in the
sea
during the three years. 600
million
tons of disposal
were processed
under the
sea
in 2005, followed by a minute decrease in 2008.
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