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The pie chart shows the type of complaints received by the Bank of America.

The pie chart shows the type of complaints received by the Bank of America. pXqD2
The pie chart shows the type of complaints received by the Bank of America. Whereas, the bar graph shows the months taken to solve the problem between 2000 and 2004. It can clearly see, the most complaints come from public, about 63%. 11 % of complaints are received form government agencies which is followed by complaints from out of state, about 10% complaints. 8% of complaints are given by insurance companies. 3% of complaints are received from bank employees and media and remaining 2 % complaints received from others. Moving to bar graph, about 4 to 5 months are taken to solve the problem in year 2000 then problem solving figure rose to 6 months. For the next two years, bank takes about 5 months to sort out complaints then about 4 months were taken by the bank to do same work, in year 2004. Overall, public is the highest to do complaints and American's bank take less time to find solution, as the time pass
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from out of state, about 10%
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. 8% of
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employees and media and remaining 2 %
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Moving to bar graph, about 4 to 5
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are taken
to solve the problem in year 2000 then problem solving figure rose to 6
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bank
takes about 5
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to sort out
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complaints
then about 4
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were taken
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bank
to do same work, in year 2004.

Overall
, public is the highest
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and American's
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take less time to find solution, as the time pass
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the type of complaints received by the Bank of America.

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4 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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