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The chart provides an illustration of money spent by The UK and France on 5 consumer products namely Cars, Computer, Books, Perfumes and Cameras in the year 2010.

The chart provides an illustration of money spent by The UK and France on 5 consumer products namely Cars, Computer, Books, Perfumes and Cameras in the year 2010. LRk6
The chart provides an illustration of money spent by The UK and France on 5 consumer products namely Cars, Computer, Books, Perfumes and Cameras in the year 2010. All the expenses are noted in Pound Sterling. Overall, The expenses done by The UK are higher than that of France. The British and French people both have spent more money on cars while the least amount of money was spent on Perfume by the British as compared to on a Camera by the French. In terms of cars, the UK spent around $450000 as compared to $400000 spent by France. Similarly, for Books and Camera, the expenses incurred by the Britisher are around $400000 and $350000 which are significantly higher than french with a difference of $150000 and $250000 respectively. On the other hand, France incurs a slightly higher expenditure at around $400000 and $150000 on technology and perfume compared to the UK by around $50000 and $100000.
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by The UK and France on 5 consumer products
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Cars, Computer, Books, Perfumes and Cameras in the year 2010. All the expenses
are noted
in Pound Sterling.

Overall
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more money on cars while the least amount of money was
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on Perfume by the British as compared to on a Camera by the French. In terms of cars, the UK
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Similarly
, for Books and Camera, the expenses incurred by the Britisher are
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$400000 and $350000 which are
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$400000 and $150000 on technology and perfume compared to the UK by
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$50000 and $100000.
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