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The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey dKB2

The bees first have to make a home which is called a hive where the bees can live, produce and store. Next the bees go in search of flowers which have nectar as these are nessacary for making honey. While in the process of taking nectar the bees also help with pollination. As the pollen grains get stuck to the bees body they help the pollen travel far away to help it pollinate. This one way a plant or flower can polinate. Carring on, the bees carry the nectar th the hive and inject them to the cells. All the cells are hexagon shape as they are known to be the most efficent and uses up all the space leaving very little gaps. Then the bees are known to do a dance which helps heat up the nectar and cells. This way the water evaporateswhich results in honey being formed.

The bees first
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have to
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make
 a home which is called
 a hive where the bees can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
, produce and store. Next
 the bees go in search of flowers which have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhoney
nectar
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nessacary
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While
 in the process of taking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhoney
nectar
 the bees also
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help
 with pollination. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 the pollen grains This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 stuck to the bees body they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 the pollen travel far away to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 it pollinate. This one way a plant or flower can Possible spelling mistake found.pollinate
polinate
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 on, the bees carry the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhoney
nectar
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 the hive and inject them to the cells. All the cells are hexagon shape as they are known
 to be the most Possible spelling mistake found.efficient
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 up all the space leaving This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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little
 gaps. Then the bees are known
 to do a dance which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
helps
 heat up the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhoney
nectar
 and cells. This way the water Possible spelling mistake found.evaporates which
evaporateswhich
 results in honey being formed
. 