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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The provided pie chart represents that total world population and money spend by citizens of different countries on different items such as clothing, food, transportation not only that but also this chart shows consumption of resources. Overall, it is visible from chart that asia is highest populated continent across the world, while on other hand Europe and america are equal in terms of population. According to given data, world spends highest amount of money on other products for instance electronic products, about 40% moreover only 12% of money was spend on housings facilities and about 6% means half of housing was spend on clothing, not only that but also around 24% of currency was spend on food item's, at last across the world about 18% of money was used for transportation purpose. In terms of population asia play significant role in population about 57% while europe and africa are equal (14%) furthermore usa contain 14% of population whereas others countries carry just 5% of population. On the other side most of energy is consumed by usa and europe nearly 60% and remaining means about 40% is used by other parts of world
The provided pie chart represents that total
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items such as clothing, food, transportation not
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this chart
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consumption of resources.

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populated continent across the
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, while on
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hand Europe and
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america
are equal in terms of population.

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data,
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spends
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amount of
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on
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products
for instance
electronic products, about 40%
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12% of
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was
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on housings facilities and about 6% means half of housing was
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spend
on clothing, not
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that
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also
around 24% of currency was
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on food item's, at last across the
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about 18% of
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was
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used
for transportation purpose.

In terms of
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asia
play significant role in
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about 57% while
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europe
and
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africa
are equal (14%)
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contain 14% of
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whereas others countries carry
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5% of
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. On the
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side
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nearly
60% and remaining means about 40% is
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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4 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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