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The chart is bar and pie.

The bar chart reports the number of people who use mobile phones by gender.  While, the pie chart describes the most used mobile services between males and females.  According to the bar chart, males own more mobile phones than their counterparts.  In addition to that, Mobicall is the most used telephone company by males.  Meanwhile, females mostly used Phonefast for their mobile services. As it shows, in the beginning there are 163 total of males possess mobile phones. After that, the trend increases to 4413 with the most popular chosen brand is Mobicall with 36%. Followed by Phonefast with 345 and at the bottom they have Supafone with below a third (30%). Furthermore, the number of cellular owned by females starts at 84 and then it rises to 4239. However, for females, they prefer to use Phonefast with a percentage of 45 for their mobile services. Then, the second falls on Supafone with 40%, finally the last goes to Mobicall with 15%.
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people
who
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use
mobile phones by gender.  While, the pie chart
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describes
the most
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used
mobile services between
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males
and
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females
.  According to the bar chart,
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males
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own
more mobile phones than their counterparts.  
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to that, Mobicall is the most
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used
telephone
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company
by
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males
.  Meanwhile,
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females
mostly
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used
Phonefast for their mobile services.

As it
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shows
, in the beginning there are 163 total of
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males
possess mobile phones. After that, the trend increases to 4413 with the most popular chosen brand is Mobicall with 36%. Followed by Phonefast with 345 and at the bottom they have Supafone with below a third (30%).
Furthermore
, the number of cellular
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owned
by
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females
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starts
at 84 and then it rises to 4239.
However
, for
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females
, they prefer to
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use
Phonefast with a percentage of 45 for their mobile services. Then, the second falls on Supafone with 40%,
finally
the last goes to Mobicall with 15%.

IELTS academic The chart is bar and pie.

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