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A small tropical island has been developed into a tourism destination.

The table chart indicates a small scale of tropical island that has been built for holiday destination. Overall, the environment has been upgraded for the community needs within the island. There was a significant deforestation between 1980 and present days from 37% to 17%. This decrease also occurred to bird species and fish population during the same period of time. On the other hand, the population of tourists have been increased from 15% up to 50% of the leisure industry. It also affected the number of children obtained education, it started from 34 percent in 1980 and grew to 85% in the present time. In addition to that, the accommodation has risen from nothing to 70% in 1990 for running water and 50% percent in the same year for houses with electricity; and these percentages improved to almost 100% in the year 2000 to these dates.
The table chart indicates a
small
scale of tropical island that has
been built
for holiday destination.
Overall
, the environment has
been upgraded
for the community needs within the island.

There was a significant deforestation between 1980 and present days from 37% to 17%. This decrease
also
occurred to bird species and fish population during the same period of time.
On the other hand
, the population of tourists have
been increased
from 15% up to 50% of the leisure industry. It
also
affected
the number of children obtained education, it
started
from 34 percent in 1980 and grew to 85% in the present time.
In addition
to that, the accommodation has risen from nothing to 70% in 1990 for running water and 50% percent in the same year for
houses
with electricity; and these percentages
improved
to almost 100% in the year 2000 to these dates.

IELTS academic A small tropical island has been developed into a tourism destination.

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  American English
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146 words
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