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The chart below gives infromation on the percentage of Beitish people giving their money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The given chart illustrates the proportion of English people who donate their money by distinct age for two decades. Overall, it is clearly seen that in 1990, the percentages were high in adults and middle-aged who had done more charity compared to the old. Figures would change in next decade. As can we see that, more than 15% adults did charity while it tumbled down to just above 5% in 2010. Although, this trend was continuing in 18 to 50 age group people. The maxium money had donated by 36 - 50 age group approximately 45%. In contrast, above 50 they gave money 35% which would increase by upto 4% in next decade. Even this trend as in above 65 age group people.
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for two decades.

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that in 1990, the percentages were high in adults and middle-aged who had done more charity compared to the
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above 5% in 2010. Although, this trend was continuing in 18 to 50
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group
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. The maxium money had donated by 36 - 50
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group approximately 45%.

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, above 50 they gave money 35% which would increase by upto 4% in
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decade. Even this trend as in above 65
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IELTS academic The chart below gives infromation on the percentage of Beitish people giving their money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

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