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The Chart shows us the Population of Japan in past, present, and future trends from the year 1950 to 2055. Passage 1: According to the given details of japan's population from the table, it shows past, present and estimates future population. First, in the year 1950 it starts with 84. 1 million population and goes on increasing till the year 2010. From the year 2010 to 2015 the population has been decreased to 2%. In the future, the population of japan in the years 2035, 2055 has estimated to be dropped down to 110 and 89. 9 million from 125. 4 million which was in 2015. Passage 2: From the table, it first shows the Population aged 65 years or over and also percentage of total population. In the year 1950, there is 4. 1 million population aged 65 or over and 4. 9% of total population of them. In the year 2005, there is 25. 7 million population and 20% of total population. In the future year 2035, the estimation of poulation will be 37. 2 and the total will be 34%. By the year 2055, the population aged 65 years will be 36. 5 and total might be 41%. Overview: When comparing the chart and table, in the chart there is 84. 1 million population in the year 1950 and it fluctuates in the upcoming and by 2055 the estimation is 89. 9 million. From the table, the population of aged 65 overs from the year 1950 to 2055 will be 36. 5 and 41% total population.
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in past
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trends from the
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1950 to 2055.

Passage 1: According to the
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of japan's
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past, present and estimates
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1950 it
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and goes on increasing till the
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2010. From the
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2010 to 2015 the
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of japan in the years 2035, 2055 has estimated to be
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to 110 and 89. 9
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from 125. 4
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which was in 2015.

Passage 2: From the
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1950, there is 4. 1
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65 or over and 4. 9% of
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of them. In the
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2005, there is 25. 7
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2035, the estimation of
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will be 37. 2 and the
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will be 34%. By the
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2055, the
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65 years will be 36. 5 and
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might be 41%.

Overview: When comparing the chart and
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, in the chart there is 84. 1
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in the
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1950 and it fluctuates in the upcoming and by 2055 the estimation is 89. 9
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of
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65 overs from the
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1950 to 2055 will be 36. 5 and 41%
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