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The chart illustrates the information about gallery technique used in United state from 2014 to 2017.it is depicted by regarded linear representation.

The chart illustrates the information about gallery technique used in United state from 2014 to 2017. it is depicted by regarded linear representation. GwmKL
From the overall, it can be vividly manifested that cash method used maximum by us residents. whereas, debit card method us utilized by local masses minimum for payment. to begin with, in 2014 debit card method used by us folk above 10%. then, in the followed year it was accounted 8%and after one year there had been a dramatic decline manifested in the use of debit card procedure near 4%. in the last year there was minor decrease 2%. analysing the rest of data, in the first year cash method used by us consumers above 20%. however, the cheque method sharply increase under35% and in the second year it was dramatically decline 25%then cash technique used by us masses it was comprised 35% from 2015 to2016. then cash method went down nearly 32% in the end of period and cash procedure rose up approximately 30%. in 2017. furthermore, in 2014 credit card used by us masses thirty percent and it was sharply decline in the end of period.
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us utilized by local masses minimum for payment.
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then
, in the followed
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it
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there had been a dramatic decline manifested in the
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procedure near 4%.
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in
the last
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there was minor decrease 2%.
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analysing
the rest of data, in the
first
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however
, the
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sharply
increase under35% and in the second
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it was
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procedure rose up approximately 30%.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the information about gallery technique used in United state from 2014 to 2017. it is depicted by regarded linear representation.

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