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The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008. 8566V
The line graph illustrates immigration and emigration in the UK, and the bar chart provides the net migration of those information from 1999 to 2008. The figures are shown in thousands of people. Generally, it can be seen that UK migration has increased in the numbers of immigration and emigration, despite some differences. Firstly, the immigration was significantly higher than emigration in the number of people during the period. The number of immigration was continued to climb and reach a peak at 600, 000 people in 2004. While, in 2008, there was the highest number of emigrants with over 400, 000 people. Additionally, the lowest number of UK immigration and emigration were in 1999 at 450, 000 and 300, 000, respectively. Moving on to the bar chart, to summarize the number of migrants, it is noticeable that the number of UK migrants from 1999-2008 was not higher than 200, 000, except in 2004 and 2007, during which migrants touched the peak at nearly 250, 000 in 2004 and closely followed by the number in 2007, with 240, 000.
The line graph illustrates
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immigration
and emigration in the UK, and the bar chart provides the net migration of
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those information
from 1999 to 2008. The figures
are shown
in thousands of
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people
.
Generally
, it can be
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seen
that UK migration has increased in the
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numbers
of
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immigration
and emigration, despite
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some
differences.

Firstly
, the
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immigration
was
significantly
higher than emigration in the
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number
of
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people
during the period. The
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number
of
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immigration
was continued
to climb and reach a peak at 600, 000
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people
in 2004. While, in 2008, there was the highest
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number
of emigrants with over 400, 000
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people
.
Additionally
, the lowest
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number
of UK
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immigration
and emigration were in 1999 at 450, 000 and 300, 000,
respectively
.

Moving on to the bar chart,
to summarize
the
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number
of migrants, it is noticeable that the
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number
of UK migrants from 1999-2008 was not higher than 200, 000, except in 2004 and 2007, during which migrants touched the peak at
nearly
250, 000 in 2004 and
closely
followed by the
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number
in 2007, with 240, 000.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008.

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6.5
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