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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant do3lP
The two plans illustrate the changes or improvements of the Grance Park from 1920 to nowadays. What is more, it can be clearly seen that the park has been extended, with much more entrances than previously. On the one hand, the entrances of Eldon Street and Arnold Avenue continue being the same. Nevertheless, in today's plan in the bottom right corner they have opened an underground entrance parking for vehicles. In addition, the seats have been replaced from the corners to the middle or centre. At the same time, the rose garden has been replaced from the top to the centre. The previous Stage for musicians, Glasshouse and Pond for water plants have been substituted for the Amphitheatre for concerts, water feature and Children's play area. In contrast, the Rose garden situated in the top of the left side, closed to Stage for musicians and Amphitheatre for concerts, is the only that has not been moved.
The two plans illustrate the
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changes
or improvements of the
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Grance
Park from 1920 to nowadays.
What is more
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the park has
been extended
, with much more entrances than previously.

On the one hand, the entrances of Eldon Street and Arnold Avenue continue being the same.
Nevertheless
, in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's plan in the bottom right corner they have opened an underground entrance parking for vehicles.
In addition
, the seats have
been replaced
from the corners to the middle or
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
. At the same time, the rose garden has
been replaced
from the top to the
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
. The previous Stage for musicians, Glasshouse and Pond for water plants have
been substituted
for the
Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.
Amphitheatre
for concerts, water feature and Children's play area.
In contrast
, the Rose garden situated in the top of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side, closed to Stage for musicians and
Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.
Amphitheatre
for concerts, is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
that has not been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

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