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The chart gives information about the proportion of students choosing different science subjects in a university in 1992 and 2000.

The chart gives information about the proportion of students choosing different science subjects in a university in 1992 and 2000. 78Yb
The bar chart illustrates, the difference in gender attending and selecting various science subjects in university in 1992 and 2000Overall, it is evident that, in both the years the number of boys are more than that of girls and biology is the most taught subject. Additionally, in 2000 there was not much variations among the proportion of men and women attending university. In 1992, only 30% of female and double than that of male availed their university education. Moreover, about 65% opted biology which was the highest while lowest of 2% only gone for computer science classes, whereas, 22% of kids learned physics. On the other hand, in 2000 there was not much difference in number of girls and boys. While, there was a drop of 20% who choose biology, it was still quit higher in demand than other subjects. However, the percentage of pupil choosing physics and computer science was almost same with 20% and 25% respectively.
The bar chart illustrates, the difference in gender attending and selecting various science subjects in university in 1992 and 2000Overall, it is evident that, in both the years the number of boys are more than that of girls and biology is the most taught subject.
Additionally
, in 2000 there was not
much
variations among the proportion of
men
and women attending university.

In 1992,
only
30% of female and
double
than that of male availed their university education.
Moreover
, about 65% opted biology which was the highest while lowest of 2%
only
gone for computer science classes, whereas, 22% of kids learned physics.
On the other hand
, in 2000 there was not much difference in number of girls and boys. While, there was a drop of 20% who choose biology, it was
still
quit higher in demand than other subjects.
However
, the percentage of pupil choosing physics and computer science was almost same with 20% and 25%
respectively
.
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