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The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 2w86
The provided pie chart depicts the world distribution of sale of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph depicts the share price of Coca-Cola between the year 1996 to 2001. In the year 2000, Coca-Cola sold 1. 7 billions of bottles of their fuzzy drink product worldwide. The largest consumer was North-America, where 30. 4 % of total volume purchased. The second largest consumer was Latin-America. Europe and Asia Purchased 20. 5 % and 16. 4% respectively
The provided pie chart depicts the world distribution of sale of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph depicts the share price of Coca-Cola between the year 1996 to 2001. In the year 2000, Coca-Cola sold 1.
Use a singular form of the numeral here: "7 billion".
7 billions of
bottles of their fuzzy drink product worldwide. The largest consumer was North-America, where 30. 4 % of total volume
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
. The second largest consumer was Latin-America. Europe and Asia
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Purchased
20. 5 % and 16. 4%
respectively
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IELTS academic The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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