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Task - I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task - I The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. oJPw
The bar chart and pie chart illustrates the figures about the poverty where the bar chart showes the numbers about share of poverty in rular areas and the pie chart is all about the data on comperison between rural and urban lands. The bar charge shows the data on rural areas poverty in the year 1993 and 2002 in six major continents of world. On compairing the numbers on two different times the wealth of people has improved in four continents out of six as the share remained same in East Asia and Pacific. Secondly in Europe and Central Asia level of poverty has increased 50 percent share to almost 70 percent. Another noticable change is that the rural poverty level has big drop in Latin America And Caribibbean from 50 percent to 40 percent. The pie chart describes the data of poverty share in rural and urban areas in the year 2002 where the 24 percent of the poor population lives in urban areas. The rural parts have more poor people living with the 76 % of share. Which is the fact rural areas have more poor people.
The bar
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and pie
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illustrates the figures about the
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poverty
where the bar
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chart
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showes
the numbers about
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share
of
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poverty
in
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rular
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areas
and the pie
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chart
is all about the data on
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comperison
between
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rural
and urban lands.

The bar charge
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shows
the data on
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rural
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areas
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poverty
in the year 1993 and 2002 in six major continents of world. On
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compairing
the numbers on two
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different
times the wealth of
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people
has
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improved
in four continents out of six as the
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share
remained same in East Asia and Pacific.
Secondly
in Europe and Central Asia level of
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poverty
has increased 50
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percent
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share
to almost 70
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percent
. Another
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noticable
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change
is that the
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rural
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poverty
level has
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big
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drop
in Latin America And
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Caribibbean
from 50
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percent
to 40 percent.

The pie
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chart
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describes
the data of
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poverty
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share
in
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rural
and urban
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areas
in the year 2002 where the 24
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percent
of the poor population
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lives
in urban
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areas
. The
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rural
parts have more poor
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people
living with the 76 % of
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share
.
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Which
is the fact
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rural
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areas
have more poor
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people
.
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IELTS academic Task - I The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002.

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  American English
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189 words
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  • Task - I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.