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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of women, men and children who consumed five portions of fruit and vegetables daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008. Overall, women ate the most fruit and vegetables, while children consumed the least amount of fruit and vegetables. It is also clear that the percentage of all people who had five portions of fruit and vegetables had increased over the given period, and the gap between the three categories had decreased. In 2001, more than 15% of men consumed five portions of fruit and vegetables, while the figure for womenwas above 20%, which is almost twice as the percentage of children (over 10%). These proportions increased gradually over the next five years to reach a peak in 2006; above 30% of women, 25% of men and below 25% of children met the goal of five portions of fruit and vegetables per day. After two years, the figures had slightly declined; it was recorded that above 30% of women consumed the required portions of fruit and vegetables, while approximately 25% of chlidren did so.
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daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

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period, and the gap between the three categories had decreased.

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