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Changes in annual spending by a particular UK school

Changes in annual spending by a particular UK school 8agPG

The provided pie charts represent the Expenses of a UK school in the first year of 3 different decades. In a glance at these 3 pie charts, it is clear that the greatest budget was dedicated to salaries of teachers, Although the amount is flunctuated from 68% in 1981 to 72% in 1991, and finally 60% in 2001. The given information shows that just a small minority of the school's money spent for insurance which has the growing trend of 2%, 3% and 8% in 1981, 1991 and 2011, respectively. Furthermore, a dramatic decline of other workers' salaries is obvious in these 3 years. Based on the first chart, the expenses of Furniture and equipment and Resources like books were the same and 15% for each of them. Resources budget has increased to 20% in 1991, however, it plunged to 9% in 2001. The amount of school spending for Furniture and equipment was volatile with the lowest level of 5% in 1991 and the highest level of 23% in 2001. Overall. the supplied pie charts illustrate that despite of significant climb of insurance and gradually drop in workers' salaries, the other categories of school spending were varied from year to year.

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