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The chart gives information about the global seles video games,DVD,and CDs products.

The chart gives information about the global seles video games, DVD, and CDs products. 0EQBB

the bar chart illustrates the global report according to changes in different seling products over 2000 to 2003. overall, It can be seen from given chart data that, CD products shelling has a constant over the period conversely Games software and DVD items has cntinuousaly increased over the given duration. According to games software, it's selling began with aproximately 15 percentage for 2000 but after that period it is continuously rose step by step, in 2001, it has roughly 20 % but in 2002, it has slightly jumpd at 27 percentage and end of the year 2003 reached 33%. on the others hand, DVD electronic equipment has constantly increasing but it has stayed between 10 % to 20%. in 2000, it has 12 % but 2001 it has marginaly rose 13 %. but between 2002 to 2003, it has increased respectively 16 % and 18%. Regard with CDs, it has constant over the 3 year, avarage aproximately 32%.

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