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The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste

The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste 9QrNx
The diagram illustrate the blue print of a present day landfill for household diposal. To begin with, Looking from an overall perspective the process for the waste collection undergoes in three stages. construction, usage and closure. First of all, a hole should be made on a rock by using machines or man-made. Inside the hole, clay and synthetic substance will be placed around it and on top of that Darnage pipes are installed over the tank. By this the construction will be completed. After the installation part, the household wate will be dumped in that, where the waste liquid will be observed by the clay. On the top of the hole, clay will be covered, when the waste is collected gass will be send to through the pipes and the waste will be diposal. The process is very simple, thus as per the diagrams representation, we have drafted the information.
The diagram
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illustrate
the blue print of a present day landfill for household
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diposal
.

To
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begin
with, Looking from an
overall
perspective the process for the
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waste
collection undergoes in three stages.
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construction
, usage and closure.

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First of all
, a hole should
be made
on a rock by using machines or
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man
-made. Inside the hole, clay and synthetic substance will
be placed
around it and
on top of that
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Darnage
pipes
are installed
over the tank. By this the construction will
be completed
.

After the installation part, the household
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wate
will
be dumped
in that, where the
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waste
liquid will
be observed
by the clay. On the top of the hole, clay will
be covered
, when the
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waste
is collected
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gass will
be
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send
to through the pipes and the
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waste
will be
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diposal
.

The process is
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very
simple,
thus
as per the
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diagrams
representation, we have drafted the information.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste

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  American English
5 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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