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The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. LroJK
The bar graph illustrates the count of visitors in millions to three museums in London from 2007 to 2012. In the initial years, Victoria and Albert museum was popular, later in 2012 national gallery became most famous museum in London in terms of visitor count. In detail, visitor count of Victoria and Albert museum is around 14 million in both years 2007 and 2008, which is declined in later years to 6 million in 2010. British museum was second popular compared to others in 2007. At that time national gallery only have 6 million visitors. The British museum dramatically declined to 6 million in 2008 and slowly increased and became 14 million in 2012. The visitor count of national gallery gradually increased from the count in 2005 and remained steady as 11 million in 2010 and 2011. Moreover, in 2012 count reached to 16 million, the annual visitors for British museum was 14 million where Victoria and Albert museum only with 10 million annual visitors.
The bar graph illustrates the
count
of
visitors
in
millions
to three
museums
in London from 2007 to 2012. In the initial years, Victoria and Albert
museum
was popular, later in 2012 national gallery became most
famous
museum
in London in terms of
visitor
count.

In detail,
visitor
count
of Victoria and Albert
museum
is around 14
million
in both years 2007 and 2008, which
is declined
in later years to 6
million
in 2010. British
museum
was second popular compared to others in 2007. At that time national gallery
only
have 6
million
visitors
. The British
museum
dramatically
declined to 6
million
in 2008 and
slowly
increased and became 14
million
in 2012.

The
visitor
count
of national gallery
gradually
increased from the
count
in 2005 and remained steady as 11
million
in 2010 and 2011.
Moreover
, in 2012
count
reached to 16
million
, the annual
visitors
for British
museum
was 14
million
where Victoria and Albert
museum
only
with 10
million
annual
visitors
.
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