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Several key trends are revealed by the graph showing variations about global population and distribution of wealth in eight different countries, in same region. These figures are expressed in percentage (%). Overall, it can be seen that the countries with the highest wealth distribution have the least percentage of people, as opposed to countries with the highest rate of population provide the least wealth. Most noticeable of all, it can be seen that, North America, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific wealth is heavily concentrated which account for almost 90% of global wealth. In contrast, North America and Rich-Asia-Pacific together account for slightly over 10% of the global population. It is also worth pointing out that, India and Africa share almost same amount of wealth which can be assumed 1%, China shows around 28% of population and become top for population in chart. The other Asia-Pacific reached second in population with around 18% and the Latin America and Caribbean having around 8%.

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