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The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.

The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries. Jr8B
The table uses four economic indicators to show the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982. Overall, it can be seen that the quality of life in the USA was far higher than in the other four countries. To begin, the USA, which is a developed country, had the highest GNP at 13, 160 dollars per head. It also had a much higher daily calorie intake and life expectancy, and the lowest rate of infant mortality. The other developing countries had quality of life ratings that were significantly lower. The range of indicators for Egypt, Indonesia and Bolivia were similar, with Egypt having the highest quality of life amongst the three. However, the infant mortality rate in Egypt’s was slightly higher than Indonesia’s at 97 deaths per 1000 compared to 87 in Indonesia.
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four economic indicators to
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the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982.
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that the quality of
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in the USA was far higher than in the other four countries.

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, the USA, which is a
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, had the highest GNP at 13, 160 dollars per head. It
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expectancy, and the lowest rate of infant mortality.

The other
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developing countries
had quality of
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ratings that were
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amongst the three.
However
, the infant mortality rate in Egypt’s was
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higher than Indonesia’s at 97 deaths per 1000 compared to 87 in Indonesia.
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IELTS academic The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.

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