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The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. VkKD

The bar chart depicts the information about earning of one country due to the export of various goods between the year 2015 and 2016. On the contrary, the table provides information about the change in the proportion of a particular good during that period. Overall, there is an upward trend in the number of exports. Remuneration from goods like petroleum and engineered ones are quite high than other goods but there is very short improvement prior to previous year whereas goods like textile had achieved great results as compared to 2015. Gems and jewellery is the only category that had negative export prior to last year. The most successful category was Textile as its export value was increased by more than 15% followed by Engineered goods with an 8. 5% rate of increase. Other goods showed mere changes in the export value prior to last year. Consequently, the Textile industry performed excellently and gave high profits to the country and the country should focus more on this category.

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