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The chart below shows the value of one conutry's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The Table shows the percentage change in category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The Provided Horizontal bar chart illustrate the specific country's outsourcing for other nations with five different categories between 2015 and 2016. Moreover, The rate of change in proportion of each of the above category are compared and tabulated in the dataset. Overall, The Expenditure of exports are showcased with decreased trend from things used for petrol to the manufacturing of clothes while both time period of 2015 as well as 2016. It is pellucid that, besides, the petroleum products, engineering goods are resulted with same constant value of around 62 billion on 2016. Inaddition to that the Gems and jewellery are ten times smaller than the Agricultural products and textiles by amount of more or less 30 billion respectively. Moving towards the Tabulation, The Textiles are rendered with dramatic increase by 15. 24 percent and also ranked one among the fields. Further point of Interest, Only Expenses of jewellery are posessed slight declination merely around 5 percent with 5. 18%.
The Provided Horizontal bar chart illustrate the specific country's outsourcing for other nations with five
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between 2015 and 2016.
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change
in proportion of each of the above category
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dataset
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for petrol to the manufacturing of clothes

while both time period of 2015
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as well as
2016.

It is pellucid that,
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, the petroleum products, engineering
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goods
are resulted
with same constant value of around 62 billion on 2016.

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Inaddition
to that the Gems and
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jewellery
are ten times smaller than the Agricultural products and textiles by amount of more or less 30 billion

respectively
.

Moving towards the Tabulation, The Textiles
are rendered
with dramatic increase by 15. 24 percent and
also
ranked one among the fields.

Further
point of Interest,
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Only
Expenses of
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jewellery
are
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posessed
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around 5 percent with 5. 18%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one conutry's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The Table shows the percentage change in category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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