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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Modern technology which refers to vast networks, fast orders and huge options. That make the big department stores Showcased their products online that is making people who has local products Compete the brands. By pressing button we can survey and watch what we need. Some people who got lost in the big stores can obtain their target using online shoing to compare the product with quality, price, colors and brands. On-line shoping make it so easy where all the process has done in one place using own intenet and smart phone or labtop. Any thing has advantages also in the othe side has disadvantages So shopping using mdern tachnlogy and smart aplications on a long term, made eruption of problems that obstruct the fluidity of make an order online such as we can not be sure that the quality of the product, the specification that distinguish the product and sometimes recieving different orders. some of product owners advertise their goods in high settings which be far away far the real one. The consumed category of people who accustomed to make shopping has a wide experience in buying online like this way because that be thei habbits. on the other hand people who Suffered a hoax or a fraud, they not trusted in online shoping Plus to the peaple who do not like or know ho to use modern technology they disagee wigh shopping by technology. Two opposit opnions have part of the reality; nowadays we should make use of modern tachnology to make our life easily but every thing has double faces so we must be careful when we deal with technology and use trusted applications. Finnaly I want to give a piece of advice which: we can try technology in shopping and in first time we can t small and chea things till trusting in this stores.
Modern
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technology
which refers to vast networks,
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fast
orders and huge options.

That
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make
the
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big
department stores Showcased their
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products
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online
that is
making
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people
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who
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has
local
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products
Compete the brands.

By pressing button we can survey and
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watch
what we need.

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Some
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people
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who
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got
lost in the
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big
stores can obtain their target using
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online
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shoing
to compare the
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product
with quality, price, colors and brands.

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On-line shoping
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make
it
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so
easy where all the process has done in one place using
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own
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intenet
and smart phone or
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labtop
.

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has advantages
also
in the
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othe
side has disadvantages
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So
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shopping
using
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mdern
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tachnlogy
and smart
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aplications
on a long term, made eruption of problems that obstruct the fluidity of
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make
an order
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online
such as we can not be sure that the quality of the
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product
, the specification that distinguish the
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product
and
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sometimes
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recieving
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different
orders.

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some
of
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product
owners advertise their
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goods
in high settings which be far away far the real one.

The consumed category of
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people
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who
accustomed to
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make
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shopping
has a wide experience in buying
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online
like this way
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because
that be
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thei
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habbits
.

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on
the other hand
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people
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who
Suffered a hoax or a fraud, they not trusted in
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online
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shoping
Plus to the
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peaple
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who
do not like or know ho to
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use
modern
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technology
they
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disagee
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wigh
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shopping
by technology.

Two
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opposit
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opnions
have part of the reality; nowadays we should
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make
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use
of modern
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tachnology
to
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make
our life
easily
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but
every thing has double faces
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so
we
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must
be careful when we deal with
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technology
and
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use
trusted applications.

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Finnaly
I want to give a piece of advice which:

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we
can try
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technology
in
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shopping
and in
first
time we
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can t
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small
and
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chea
things till trusting in
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this
stores.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.

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308 words
5.5
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