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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables illustrate average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel in England from 1985 to 2000. Overall, walking, bicycle and local bus experienced decline in models of travel, whereas the car long distance bus, train, taxi and others are increased in modes of travels from 1985 to 2000. Firstly, walking began with 255 per person in 1985 but lightly decreased in 2000 by 18 person. Bicycle fell from 51 to 41 between 1985 and 2002. Similarly, local bus plunged by 155 persons from 1985 to 2000. Secondly, car was the most famous transportation in the table. Car rose from 3199 in 1985 to 4809 in 2000. Long distance bus and train were sightly went up by 10 to 77 persons in 2000. Although, taxi have a smaller number of 13 people in 1985, it gently surged by 29 people in 2000. Other mode of travel went up from 459 to 585 in 15 years. Consequently, all modes of transportation rose up from 4740 to 6475 between 1985 and 2020.
The tables illustrate average distance in miles travelled per
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per year, by
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mode
of
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travel
in England from 1985 to 2000.

Overall
, walking, bicycle and local bus experienced decline in models of
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travel
, whereas the car long distance bus, train, taxi
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and others
are increased
in
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modes
of
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travels
from 1985 to 2000.

Firstly
, walking began with 255 per
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person
in 1985
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but
lightly
decreased in 2000 by 18
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person
. Bicycle fell from 51 to 41 between 1985 and 2002.
Similarly
, local bus plunged by 155
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persons
from 1985 to 2000.

Secondly
, car was the most
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famous
transportation in the table. Car rose from 3199 in 1985 to 4809 in 2000. Long distance bus and train were
sightly
went up by 10 to 77
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persons
in 2000. Although, taxi have a smaller number of 13
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people
in 1985, it
gently
surged by 29
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people
in 2000. Other
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mode
of
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travel
went up from 459 to 585 in 15 years.
Consequently
, all
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modes
of transportation rose up from 4740 to 6475 between 1985 and 2020.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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