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The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014

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The bar chart outlines the top ten countries which made the highest travel expenditure in 2014 and it also compares how much these countries spent on travel in the same year. The data was collected from UNWTO. Overall, China stood at the top of the list with the highest spending while Taiwan proclaimed the tenth position. As the diagram suggests, China spent almost 110 billion US dollar in 2014 for travel while the US and Germany each with its nearly 85 billion spending attained at the second position in this list. The UK spent roughly 55 billion, less than half of China, for travel and the UK's spending for travel was more than double than that of Singapore. The travel spending by South Korea and Hong Kong was a tie and they each spend 20 billion USD in 2014. India's spending was just over 15 billion while Malaysia and Taiwan stood at the bottom two positions in the list with around 10-12 billion spending for the same.
The bar chart outlines the top ten countries which made the highest
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travel
expenditure in 2014 and it
also
compares how much these countries spent on
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travel
in the same year. The data
was collected
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UNWTO
.
Overall
, China stood at the top of the list with the highest
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spending
while Taiwan proclaimed the tenth position.

As the diagram suggests, China spent almost 110
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billion
US dollar in 2014 for
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travel
while the US and Germany each with its
nearly
85
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attained at the second position in this list. The UK spent roughly 55
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billion
, less than half of China, for
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travel
and the UK's
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for
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travel
was more than double than that of Singapore. The
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by South Korea and Hong Kong was a
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tie and
they each spend 20
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USD in 2014. India's
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was
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over 15
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while Malaysia and Taiwan stood at the bottom two positions in the list with around 10-12
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for the same.
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