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proprortion of energy capacity

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The pie chart below illustrates the percentage of energy capacity in 2012 and anticipate how it is in the next 18 years. Overall, as can be seen, the amount of fossil fuels energy is more than other energy kinds in both years. The rate of Fossil fuel is 64 per cent and have the largest portion between energy types and its percentage will adecrease by 20 per cent in 2030. The second-largest section belongs to other renewables energies which are one-fifth of the total. This field is predicted to reduce a few per cent and still will be in second place. Although Renewable energy types like wind and solar have under 5 of total energy capacity respectively in 2012 it is estimated to rise dramatically in 2030 and will increase by 7 and 16 per cent respectively. Other energy types like flexible capacity kinds or nuclear energy have a small amount of capacity and it is forecast don’t change significantly in the future.
The pie chart below illustrates the percentage of
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energy
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capacity
in 2012 and anticipate how it is in the
next
18 years.
Overall
, as can be
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seen
, the amount of fossil fuels
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energy
is more than other
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energy
kinds in both years.

The rate of Fossil fuel is 64 per cent and have the largest portion between
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energy
types and its percentage will
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adecrease
by 20 per cent in 2030. The second-largest section belongs to other renewables
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energies
which are one-fifth of the total. This field
is predicted
to
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reduce
a few per cent and
still
will be in second place.

Although Renewable
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energy
types like wind and solar have under 5 of total
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energy
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capacity
respectively
in 2012 it
is estimated
to rise
dramatically
in 2030 and will increase by 7 and 16 per cent
respectively
. Other
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energy
types like flexible
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capacity
kinds or nuclear
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energy
have a
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small
amount of
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capacity
and it is forecast don’t
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change
significantly
in the future.
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