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The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Units are measured in US $ Billion. Overall, the highest amount for travelling is spend by China. Both South Korea, Hong Kong, United States and Germany spend a similar amount of money for travelling purposes. While, the least amount of money is spend by Taiwan for the travelling in 2014. In terms of China rose to approximately around $110 billion of amount spend for travelling. it is gradual decrease to about $85 billion both in United States and Germany. The next highest amount spend for travelling country is United Kingdom around $55 billion respectively. Around the period Singapore spend approximately about $25 billion in 2014. Once more both South Korea and Hong Kong spend a same amount for traveling about $20 billion respectively. To begin with there were three least amount spending countries (India, Malaysia, and Taiwan) respectively. India spend about $18. 5 billion while Malaysia spend $10 billion for traveling. Finally, Taiwan spend approximately about $5billion sequentially.
The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Units
are measured
in US $
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Overall
, the highest
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by China. Both South Korea, Hong Kong, United States and Germany
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a similar
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of money for
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purposes. While, the least
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of money is
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by Taiwan for the
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travelling
in 2014.

In terms of China rose to approximately around $110
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Kingdom around $55
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approximately about $25
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in 2014. Once more both South Korea and Hong Kong
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a same
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for traveling about $20
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billion
respectively
. To
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with there were three least
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spending countries (India, Malaysia, and Taiwan)
respectively
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about $18. 5
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while Malaysia
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$10
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for traveling.
Finally
, Taiwan
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sequentially
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014.

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