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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given graph compares the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Overall, it is clear that the number of university females graduates is more that males graduates in Canada between 1992 and 2007. Looking in more detail at our given numbers, in 1992 there were 70000 males who graduated from varitey universities in Canada, while 100000 females did the same. In the same way, the number of females graduates is still increasing every year comparing to the number of males graduates from 1994 to 2000. Starting from 2002 it was found that the number of females graduates was more than 110000 girl. Meanwhile, almost 75000 male graduated from universities this year. Crystal clear, the gape between numbers were huge, as we notice less that 100000 males had their university's certificates in 2006 in time when almost 150000 females got their graduate's certificates too.
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graph compares the
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university
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graduates
in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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, it is
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clear
that the
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number
of
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university
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females
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graduates
is more that
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males
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graduates
in Canada between 1992 and 2007.

Looking in more detail at our
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given
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, in 1992 there were 70000
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males
who graduated from
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varitey
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universities
in Canada, while 100000
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females
did the same.

In the same way
, the
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number
of
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females
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graduates
is
still
increasing every year comparing to the
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number
of
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males
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graduates
from 1994 to 2000.

Starting from 2002 it
was found
that the
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number
of
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females
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graduates
was more than 110000 girl. Meanwhile, almost 75000 male graduated from
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universities
this year.

Crystal
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clear
, the gape between
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numbers
were huge, as we notice less
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that
100000
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males
had their university's certificates in 2006 in time when almost 150000
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females
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got
their graduate's certificates too.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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