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the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. n932
The graph represents the information about how much coffee and tea is consumed in five cities of Australia over a period of a month. The data reveals that the trend of buying fresh coffee and tea is less than the trend of visiting a café for the purpose of having tea or coffee except in one city and that is Adelaide. Drinking coffee or tea in a café is most popular in Melbourne which represents almost 64% of its residence whereas only about 34% of Brisbane’s went to coffee bar which is least among all cities. Purchase of instant coffee is moderate as compared to fresh coffee and taking coffee from café. Acording to given information Hobart is at first place with 54% and Sydney is at last place with percentage of 46. Overall, buying coffee from a café is more popular than purchasing fresh coffee or tea among different cities of Australia.
The graph represents the information about how much
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coffee
and
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tea
is consumed
in five cities of Australia over a period of a month.

The data reveals that the trend of buying fresh
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coffee
and
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tea
is less than the trend of visiting a café for the purpose of having
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tea
or
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coffee
except in one city and
that is
Adelaide. Drinking
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coffee
or
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tea
in a café is most popular in Melbourne which represents almost 64% of its residence whereas
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only
about 34% of Brisbane’s went to
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coffee
bar which is least among all cities.

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Purchase
of instant
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coffee
is moderate as compared to fresh
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coffee
and taking
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coffee
from café.
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Acording
to
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given
information Hobart is at
first
place with 54% and Sydney is at last place with percentage of 46.

Overall
, buying
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coffee
from a café is more popular than purchasing fresh
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coffee
or
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tea
among
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different
cities of Australia.

IELTS academic the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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