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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

according to the chart of coffee and tea buying and drinking habiys in five cities in australia, the percentage of city residents who bought fresh coffee in sydney is the highest among the cities, and in melbourne is the lowest with only about 34%. the chart aslo shows that the percentage of city residents who went to a cafe for coffee or tea in the melbourne is the highest, with a percentage of almost 49%. out of all the cities, hobart seemes to have the highest percentage of people who bought instant coffee, about 54%. in contrast, sydney is the city, which has the lowest percentage of residents who bought instant coffee, with only about 45, 5%. in all of the cities, the percentage of people who went to a cafe for coffee or tea in the last 4 weeks is the highest out of of three drinking habits, except for adelaide which has the percentage of people who bought instant coffee as the highest. this chart also shows that the percentage of people who bought fresh coffee in every city is the lowest out of the three drinking habits.
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coffee
and tea buying and drinking
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habiys
in five
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cities
in
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australia
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percentage
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who
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bought
fresh
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coffee
in
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sydney
is the highest among the
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cities
, and in
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melbourne
is the lowest with
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only
about 34%.
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the
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that the
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who
went to a
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for
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coffee
or tea in the
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melbourne
is the highest, with a
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percentage
of almost 49%.
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out
of all the
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cities
,
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hobart
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seemes
to have the highest
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people
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who
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instant
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coffee
, about 54%.
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in
contrast,
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sydney
is the city, which has the lowest
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percentage
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who
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bought
instant
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coffee
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about 45, 5%.
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in
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cities
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people
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who
went to a
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for
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or tea in the last 4 weeks is the highest out
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of of
three drinking habits,
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adelaide
which has the
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people
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who
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bought
instant
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coffee
as the highest.
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this
chart
also
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people
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fresh
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coffee
in every city is the lowest out of the three drinking habits.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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