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the charts below show the results of a survey about what peple of different age groups say makes them most happy

The provided pie graphs illustrate the outcomes of research on the ratio of aspects that bring joy to the citizens in two different age ranges between early-matured and middle age. Overall, more than half of the motives are approximate between the two ages. And accomplishment in their careers plays a vital role in offering pleasant to the subjects. In contrast, other factors take up the minority in bringing both youngsters and matures happiness. It can be seen that being with family accounts for 14% of elements that pleasure people Who are over 30. The under-30s on the other hand are more into traveling. Both have to do hobbies as an activity that take up to slightly more than 20% of the factors which make them pleased. Almost 20% of the youngsters’ reasons for being happy is having a good appearance, instead of looking good, it is financial security for the over- 30s.
The provided pie graphs illustrate the outcomes of research on the ratio of aspects that bring joy to the citizens in two
different
age ranges between early-matured and middle age.

Overall
, more than half of the motives are approximate between the two ages. And accomplishment in their careers plays a vital role in offering pleasant to the subjects.
In contrast
, other factors take up the minority in bringing both youngsters and matures happiness.

It can be
seen
that being with family accounts for 14% of elements that pleasure
people
Who are over 30. The under-30s
on the other hand
are more into traveling. Both
have to
do hobbies as an activity that take up to
slightly
more than 20% of the factors which
make
them
pleased
.

Almost 20% of the youngsters’ reasons for being happy is having a
good
appearance,
instead
of looking
good
, it is financial security for the over- 30s.
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IELTS academic the charts below show the results of a survey about what peple of different age groups say makes them most happy

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4 paragraphs
152 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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