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The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart illustrates the reasons why employees commute to work using bicycle or by car. Main reason for employees commuting on bicycle is health and fitness and environmental pollution, while the main reason for employees commuting through car is comfort. On one hand people ridding bicycle to work believe it has following benefits like 30% of people say it’s good for staying fit and healthy and reducing pollution. 15% say it resolves their parking problem, while other 12% think it helps you reach faster to work place than driving a car. Whereas 13% ride because it is free (No cost involved). On the other hand people driving car to work think it has following advantages like 40% employees say it’s comfortable to drive. 21% people use it because the distance between work place and home is more. 11% drive for the safety reasons while other reasons includes faster than cycling(14%) and need to carry stuff to work (14%) as stated by the employees.
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commute to
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using bicycle or by car.

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commuting on bicycle is health and fitness and environmental pollution, while the main
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commuting through car is comfort.

On one hand
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ridding bicycle to
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believe it has following benefits like 30% of
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say it’s
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for staying fit and healthy and reducing pollution. 15% say it resolves their parking problem, while other 12%
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you reach faster to
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place than driving a car. Whereas 13% ride
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it is free (No cost involved).

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driving car to
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it has following advantages like 40%
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say it’s comfortable to drive. 21%
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the distance between
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place and home is more.

11% drive for the safety
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while other
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includes faster than cycling(14%) and need to carry stuff to
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(14%) as stated by the
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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6.0
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