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graph below shows the percentage of school leavers from three schools in the same town who went on to higher or further education. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

graph below shows the percentage of school leavers from three schools in the same town who went on to higher or further education. Wjp0
The graph provides information about three schools over a five year period. Overall, it illustrates what percentage of students continued their studies after leaving these three schools between 2008 and 2012. It is clear that, in 2008, the percentage of school leavers going on to higher education ranged between twenty and thirty five percent. The highest of these figures was in Dovehouse School, while the lowest was at Highfield Academy. There was an increase of five percent across all three schools the following year, but the most significant change occurred in 2010. That year there was a marked increase at both Highfield Academy and Dovehouse School. However, at Starmead College, there was a drop of 10%. Figures stagnated in 2011, but there were further changes in the final year, when figures continued increasing at Highfield Academy and Dovehouse School. This widened the gap with Starmead College, where figures continued to fall to just over twenty percent.
The graph provides information about three
schools
over a five
year
period.

Overall
, it illustrates what percentage of students continued their studies after leaving these three
schools
between 2008 and 2012.

It is
clear
that, in 2008, the percentage of
school leavers
going on to higher education ranged between twenty and
thirty five
percent. The highest of these
figures
was in
Dovehouse
School
, while the lowest was at
Highfield
Academy. There was an increase of five percent across all three
schools
the following
year
,
but
the most significant
change
occurred in 2010. That
year
there was a marked increase at both
Highfield
Academy and
Dovehouse
School
.
However
, at
Starmead
College, there was a drop of 10%.
Figures
stagnated in 2011,
but
there were
further
changes
in the final
year
, when
figures
continued increasing at
Highfield
Academy and
Dovehouse
School
. This widened the gap with
Starmead
College, where
figures
continued to fall to
just
over twenty percent.
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IELTS academic graph below shows the percentage of school leavers from three schools in the same town who went on to higher or further education.

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