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The pie charts illustrate the percentage failure of one university students in England that could speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage failure of one university students in England that could speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010. wldq
The pie charts illustrate the percentage failure of one university students in England that could speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010. Overall, during the decade, a huge proportion of students were able to speak Spanish, while the least allotment of these students could speak German. In 2000, one fifth of student did not know any language except English, this proportion decreased in 2010, and just 10% of students were one-lingual. The proportion of student who spoke German, in addition to English, was the same for both years (10%). In addition, bilingual students who could speak Spanish, increased from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010. The percentage of pupils at university, who had ability of speaking another language and French only were identical in 2000, but, in 2010, proportion of another language experienced a 5% increase to 20% and French only percentage decrease from 15% to 10%. Moreover, the proportion of trilingual student also increased by 5%
The pie charts illustrate the percentage failure of one university
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in England that could
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speak
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languages
other than English in 2000 and 2010.

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proportion
of
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students
were able to
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speak
Spanish, while the least allotment of these
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students
could
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speak
German.

In 2000, one fifth of
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student
did not know any
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language
except English, this
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proportion
decreased in 2010, and
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just
10% of
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students
were one-lingual. The
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proportion
of
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student
who spoke German,
in addition
to English, was the same for both years (10%).
In addition
, bilingual
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students
who could
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speak
Spanish, increased from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010.

The percentage of pupils at university, who had ability of speaking another
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language
and French
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only
were identical in 2000,
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but
, in 2010,
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proportion
of another
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language
experienced a 5% increase to 20% and French
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only
percentage decrease from 15% to 10%.
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, the
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proportion
of trilingual
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student
also
increased by 5%
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the percentage failure of one university students in England that could speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010.

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