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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia. 3jOd

The bar chart compares differences among native people and migrants to visit various places such as zoo, library, theatre and cinema in percentage. Also, the migrants were categorized in two types: migrants who born in English-speaking countries (MESC) and other migrants. With the first glance, cinema was in favor of all types of people especially local one and after that MESC, about 70 and 65 percent respectively. However, in the case of migrants born in other countries go to library was the most priority maybe to promote their language knowledge or other qualities. The least amount of interest was theatre with fewer than 25% for all groups and new migrants born in other countries about 10%. For MESC, after cinema with about 65%, zoo was likely to visit around 50% and library 40%. All in all, local people and MESC have almost similar trend for all places whereas migrants who were not born in English-spoken countries have more tendency toward library

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